Friday, July 24, 2015

5 tips to Get More Creative with Your Writing from Writer's Digest

Fellow Writers,

I came across this article from Writer's Digest on 5 tips to be more creative in your writing. Check out the link here and tell me what you think in the comments below. 

I thought that they had some great rules.

I thought the insight to start out with tension was especially important.

I don't think we emphasize that enough as writers. So often we start with dialog or long info dumps...or just boring pieces.

I think that this is especially true in today's world. People get bored so easily. If you don't start out with tension, they'll just move on to the next book.

Ending each chapter with a cliff. I think all of us have fallen prey to the "I'll just read one more chapter" idea only to have the chapter end in such a way that we have to keep reading. 

Definitely another good tip.

What did you think?


Danica Page  

Tuesday, July 7, 2015

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Page Turners,

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Danica Page 
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Saturday, June 27, 2015

Top 10 Writing Tips and the Pyschology Behind Them

Hello Writers,

I came across this article today and thought it was intriguing. While this doesn't talk about novel writing in specific, I still thought it was worth the read.

I especially like their first two pieces of advice: Writer shorter and shorten your sentences.

While variety in sentence structure is important, I think it's worthwhile to recognize the importance of writing concisely. 

I also thought that their advice to avoid jargon was also useful. Jargon is everywhere. The avid sports fanatic might know terms that other would not, and the list goes on. 

What do you guys think?


Danica Page 

Thursday, June 25, 2015

21 Harsh But Eye-Opening Writing Tips From Great Authors

Fellow Writers,

I came across this intriguing article that contains 21 quotes about writing from some of the most prolific writers

The post title says it all: some of these are really harsh, but they're accurate. 

Some of my favorites were:

 I would advise anyone who aspires to a writing career that before developing his talent he would be wise to develop a thick hide. — Harper Lee

You can’t wait for inspiration. You have to go after it with a club. ― Jack London

Remember: when people tell you something’s wrong or doesn’t work for them, they are almost always right. When they tell you exactly what they think is wrong and how to fix it, they are almost always wrong. – Neil Gaiman

 Don’t take anyone’s writing advice too seriously.– Lev Grossman

Those were some of my favorites. All of the rest were incredible as well. Which ones did you like? Go to their site and check it out.

I'm especially finding that when people tell you exactly how to fix something, they are in fact usually wrong. A brilliant quote. 

Do you agree with these quotes? Why or Why not?


Danica Page 

Wednesday, March 18, 2015

The Oxford Comma: What's the consensus anyway?

Dear Writers and Friends,

I'm sure you've come across the term "Oxford comma." What is the debate on this? Why can't people seem to come to an agreement? Should I use it or not? 

There are a million posts on this one heated grammar rule, but I've been asked a lot about this rule lately. So here is yet another post on it. Be sure to check out the end of the post for some more helpful posts on this. 

What is the Oxford Comma?

According to The Chicago Manual of Style, the Oxford comma is used when a conjunction joins the last two elements in a series of three or more (section 6.18). An example would be: The flag was red, white, and blue. That last comma between "white" and "and" is known as the Oxford comma.

What's the consensus? Do I use it or not?

This is a divided issue. Years ago, the Oxford comma was strictly enforced. In recent years, many have strongly argued against the use of this comma. Now it's a divided issue. 

Proponents of the Oxford comma

Most editors and The Chicago Manual of Style argue in favor of the Oxford comma. Proponents of the Oxford comma say that it prevents ambiguity. 

For example, consider the following examples. 

Yes, these are some extreme examples. But really, without the Oxford comma, sentences are full of ambiguity and confusion. As an editor, I see sentences like this all the time. 

Who Recommends Using:

  • The Chicago Manual of Style (current edition)
  • MLA
  • APA (the official website even goes as far as to requiring it)
Opponents of the Oxford Comma

It's clunky and unnecessary, opponents cry. And in some cases, it is. "The flag was red, white and blue." There isn't really any ambiguity here. In this case, putting that last comma could be clunky. 

Who Recommends Not Using
  • AP Styleguide
  • Most of Europe

Know what style you're writing for. If you're writing in AP style, you don't have a choice. You can't put that Oxford comma in. Other than that, more or less it's your choice.

The key is consistency. Use it or don't. Make your choice and stick with it.  

My Thoughts

I am Team Oxford comma, as most editors are. It just prevents some awkward situations like the ones listed above. 

 For more articles on this, check out the following links.

What do you think?


Danica Page

Tuesday, March 17, 2015

Comma Rules 101

Fellow Writers and Readers,

Lately, several writers have asked me questions about commas. Today I decided to answer those questions. As always, I've linked to several additional posts. You don't have to take my word on anything. 

If you feel you understand what independent and dependent clauses are, please feel free to skip to the sections about "Combining Independent and Dependent Clauses" and "Short Clauses and Commas." Those discuss the most frequent errors. 

What's an Independent Clause?

In simple terms, an independent clause is something that can stand by itself (form a simple sentence). 

An independent clause needs to satisfy all three of these requirements:

1) has a subject
2) has a verb
3) expresses a complete thought.

An independent clause can be as short as two words (Henry jumped) or as long as you can imagine.

Find out more about independent clauses by following this link.

What's a Dependent Clause?

A dependent clause is something that cannot stand by itself (fails to form a simple sentence).

In other words, it fails to have one or more of these elements:

1) a subject
2) a verb
3) a complete thought. 

Usually, a trigger word sets off the dependent clause. The words include words like because, but, and, after, since, during, although, and though).

An example of a dependent clause is because it was raining. This fails to express a complete thought. 

Another example is ate apples. This lacks a subject. 

It's easy conceptually, but when it comes to using commas to combine clauses, more than not we mess up. 

Find out more by following this link.

Combining two Independent clauses

When combining two independent clauses, you have a few options. Let's take these two sentences: Larry likes to eat apples daily. He also enjoys going on long runs.

The most common way of linking these sentences together is to use a conjunction (and, but, so) and a comma.

Larry likes to eat apples daily, and he also enjoys going on long runs.

When you have two sentences closely linked together, you can also use a semicolon.

Larry likes apples; he also likes bananas.

We usually link two independent clauses correctly. The following sections explain where we normally mess up. 

Combining Independent and Dependent Clauses
(This is the one that's usually messed up) 

Let's take the example of Larry did not go running. This is an independent clause. It has a subject and a verb. It also expresses a complete thought.

Let's also take the example of But ate apples instead. The second example is a dependent clause because it's missing a subject.

ERROR: Many writers are tempted to put Larry did not go running, but ate apples instead.

Why is that wrong? It's wrong because the second clause does not have a subject (it's dependent). It is wrong to use a comma and a conjunction to link an independent clause and a dependent clause. 

Note: There is no such thing as an implied subject. If it doesn't have a subject, it's a dependent clause. There are no exceptions. 

There are two correct ways to write that sentence correctly:

Larry did not go running, but he ate apples instead. This converts both clauses to independent clauses. (In other words, both clauses have subjects and verbs and express complete thoughts. They both could stand alone.)

Or Larry did not go running but ate apples instead. This one keeps the dependent clause, but it is not set off by a comma. This is correct. 

Simply put, you link two clauses with a conjunction and a comma if they both can stand alone as sentences (are both independent clauses).

For more on this rule, check out these links:
 Commas before but and Commas and clauses

Short Clauses and Commas? 

Is I swore, and he turned to glare at me. or I swore and he turned to glare at me correct?

Okay this is perhaps one of the most misunderstood rules. Take a good look at the sentence structure.

It contains two independent clauses. I swore.  and He turned to glare at me. Technically following the rules, you would think we need the comma.

However, according to The Chicago Manual of Style (chapter 6 section 18), this comma can be omitted. The exact wording from Chicago is "If the clauses are very short and closely connected, the comma may be omitted."

(A short clause is generally interpreted to be 4 words or less.) 

This means that I swore and he turned to glare at me is absolutely 100% correct. 

Really? Is that really true?

I know this is new for several people, so I've attached several links to support this claim. 

CWS Illinois (see the section "commas used to separate" number 10). You can also look at the section "commas used to set off" number 2 for examples when using adverbial phrases.
Grammarly Answers- This one shows that Gardner argues against this rule. However, both MLA, AP Styleguide, and Chicago argue for the omission of this comma.  
Ted Montgomery- see 11a. 
National Geographic Style Manual- (see number 5 and 6) 

Let me know if you have questions. You can always email me at danicapage(dot)writer(at)gmail(dot)com. 


Danica Page

Hello Writers!

Fellow Writers, Readers, and Friends,

Recently, I decided to redesign this site to better portray the current purpose of this blog. 

This blog has transformed over the years. It started out as a place for me to post random thoughts on writing, then shifted to a place where I shared my own writing, then to a place where I could explore questions on editing, and then finally it shifted into the professional editing site that it is today.

To reflect that change, I wanted to post more professional content.

This blog will now be dedicated to exploring rules about grammar and content that are often tricky for writers. 

I hope you find it useful. 


Danica Page